Where The Demon Lurks

so lets start off with i ship lucian and boku soooooooooooooooo hard! it made me laugh so hard! its clear a lot of love and effort went into this game :3

kobu and toast all the way! (I hope there's more updates! :D )

Just wondering but is Amare on the autism spectrum? I'm getting extremely strong neurodivergent vibes from him. 

i love the story and the art so muchhhh!! i cant wait for new updates to the story!!  o(^▽^)o

(i ship kobu and lucian btw hehe)

cool artstyle!!!!! plus its cute tooo!!!

Haven't decided yet if it's going to be team Morris or team Toast. I like 'em both.

And I love Boku's white shirt with the three pixelated hearts. He looks the part wearing that. Come to think of it, he looks the part without it as well!

impressive~

//**WARNING: MINOR SPOILERS*
//omfg the relationship between Toast and Jack
//(using the name I used for Player Character in my playthrough)
//is so FUCKING ADORABLE!!!
//I hope it evolves more
//(by choices you make, ECT.) into either a Romantic
//or just Friendship sort of relationship :D

(Spoiler-ish)

"I want to have a baby."

"That's great, whose going to be the mother?"

"You."

"Dios mio!"

😄💖💖 This made my crackle, I love WTDL sm <3

I need Lucian man, I need him so badly. He and everyone else would be adorable as a plush 

started playing this game about a week ago and i already loveeee it so much. Theres so much love put into it and its chatacters which just makes them feel so alive. cant wait for the next update and im a number one toast fan

i'm really in love for this game, even if i'm brazillian i'm enjoying this history. When go out more updates? (congratulation for this amazing game and also sorry about my engllish :3) 

Edit: will you have plan for translate in portuguese in the future?

Great job on this update! Very immersive visual and sound effects! Also terms for fan translations show professionalism!

3rd comment of the day, apologies but I think I found a typo, Is this meant to say retain? (after "yet you")

I'm really not sure how close I am to being done with what the vn has in store for now but even less than an hour in I love everything about this!! Story, characters, art, I'm obsessed! You couldn't get me to read anything longer than 10 pages but I'm locked into this lol. (And I love coming up with voices for the characters)

exactly whos route did u guys update....is it for all of them or just one????

AHHHHHHHHH. The new CG in Toast's route at hot spring was such a blessing.

There is a great need for a Chinese translator. Can the author consider it?❤❤❤

This VN suddenly got me into DILFs. Demons I like to ****.

this VN deserves a fanwiki

Almost Nut Experience, really!?  hahaha!

So far, I'm loving this! Early on in Morris' route. The writing is great, the humor is wonderful, and there's generous use of basic animations. SUPER kudos for putting in the effort NOT to mirror sprites when it would be obvious (the store uniforms, the hearts shirt, Morris' arm, etc). I notice some characters don't have speaking sprites (like Vendrake), but this is still a very early build from the version number.

You also managed to make a flamboyantly gay character that doesn't drive me up the wall, and in fact is someone I care for, with King. (I'm bi, so it's not the sexuality of those characters that gets to me.) He's bright, confident, and affectionate without being overbearing and in-your-face. I can't wait to see how things turn out for him!

I noticed how linear it was, and coming back here I see its "mostly kinetic" so that explains things. That said, I think you might want to consider changing the narration from second person to third, since Kobu is clearly his own character, and because it's so linear. I don't feel like I'm Kobu the same way as other VN protags because of how few choices we get. So maybe make it third-person? (I know that's a LOT to rewrite, so I understand if you decide not to ^^; )

I super-appreciate that you actually have multiple body shapes available for paths--you've got the twink, the bara, and the beefcake. As a fan of softer guys, I think it's awesome that you're letting us choose like this. All three also are quite interesting. Lucien's stuck up, but clearly concerned and good at heart; Morris is surprisingly crafty for a boar (yay pigs!) and down to Earth; and Toast is adorably off the wall. As well, I've noticed that your nipples are...actually pretty tame, and that's kinda refreshing. They don't try and draw your attention, they're very simple and convey what you intend. (At least on Kobu so far, dunno how it is on the others.)

Overall, this is a lovely project, and I can't wait to see where this goes. If the story itself is already complete, as in we get an ending, I'll be VERY impressed since this is such an early build! Keep working hard, looking forward to more :)

Have you considered translating into Chinese?

Ai cara... eu tô  tão  ansioso pra ver mais dessa história...  gosto muito do morris kkkkkk

I love the story!! i feel like there is so much lore to this world and id love to hear abt it!!

I have only finished Lucien's route but its a fun visual novel. Plus I genuinely smiled when I saw some familiar thing in my life that none VN might explore. (ChickenRice )

I really got invested into visual novels recently and by far this is one the best I have seen so far even though it's incomplete also i recommend other visual novels if like romantic/lore heavy novel I recommend "Repeat"(it's nsfw so I warned you ) or the other visual novel "kibbleton University" (it's also nsfw) made by the same team that made WTDL 

(Sorry if I promote another visual novel)

This is a wonderful visual novel you all made 

pretty good i liked it

Really loving the story and designs so far, especially this dood

I'm always left smiling after each update 😁 especially after Toast's~ he's such a feel good character for me 😋

I must applaud the team for all the hard work that's been put into this project, because not only does it look good, but it FUNCTIONS well. All the sprites, animations, UI, it's all great 😌

It's crazy to think how far xou've come from the original demo where Kobu left hell on vacation and had random sex to this full fledged tale with a compelling storyline! 😊 It's been such a fun journey

I'm really excited for the future of this VN, please keep up all the AMAZING work! 💜

Oh, and 1ne last thing... ¡¡¡TOOOAST!!! 😍

not to be rushing, but when can we expect the next update? thanks! ;3

as much is this is a SFW VN, does it at least have dating in it? 

LOVE LUCIAN SO MUCH AHhh

This game is finish?

It at least have nsfw? Like i hadn't read it yet

Lucian and Kobu looks perfect together, i can't get enough of them hhhhh. I hope i can see those two confessing to each other in future updates hehe. 

Really awesome VN btw, love it.

Iowa 100% ahead over heels for Fortis I'm going to be honest if I'm not able to get to a point where I have the main character begging to get smashed by Fortis I'm going to be a little bit sad.